Posted in Onomatopoeia

Mission Accomplished

With swooshing whoosh,
the arrow of Cupid
stings and clings to the heart
which flutters and sputters
falling flat with a splat
and zoom, with a boom,
it’s in love.

© Susan Schoeffield

Written for the 2/8/15 post at the Phoenix Rising Poetry Guild to write a love poem employing the poetic devices of Onomatopoeia and/or Alliteration.

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